After reading it, I know why I said that Michel Peter Ron F did not know where to go.

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After reading it, I know why I said that Michel Peter Ron F did not know where to go.

2016-07-31 23:03:12 320 ℃

An outstanding speech can highlight the importance of writing often. Speech is known as the text to the ears to listen. Memorable speeches tend to use some rhetorical devices to polish, such as parallelism or emphasize the word order arrangement - reasonable use these rhetorical devices will not show the core content of the speech. When the language strategy to a certain level of sublimation, the audience and readers will be like wearing a perspective glasses to see through the original intention of the author.

Last night I listened to Obama Michel's speech at the Democratic National People's Congress. The speech was widely praised, even with this year's presidential candidate Hilary's opponent, Trump Donald, has added to the success of his speech. Some critics have praised the speech as a remarkable speech that was rarely seen for decades.

So why the first lady's speech can be A single word of gold., every phrase a gem? If we can solve this problem, it can be her writing strategies in the collection bag.

I will refer to the original text of Obama Michel's speech released by Vox (known as the United States media company) as an analysis object. Analysis of speech in the most outstanding, the most influential part of the segment. Of course, if you are willing to appreciate the excellent speech, you can read all the content of their own. Let us start from the first paragraph of:

"It is hard to believe that it has been eight years since I first came to this Convention to talk with you about why I thought my husband should be president. Remember how I told you about his character and his conviction. His decency and grace? The traits we have seen every day as he served our country in the White House."

"It's hard to believe that eight years have passed. Eight years ago, the first time I stood in this conference, I tell you why my husband should be president. Remember, I introduced him to his talent and faith, and his manners and manners. During his tenure, these qualities have always been accompanied by his dedication to the country and the people."

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Liberation pronoun. Using the first person, the second person and the third person are only used to create special effects. Go back and look at the pronoun used in this section and the entire speech, every generation nouns carry out their duties, with the right. "I". "I (accusative)" or "I (genitive) of the first person vocabulary will highlight the personal appeal. "We" or "our (accusative)" this kind of complex vocabulary will show team cohesion. You said to use will reduce all the prose style as a quality suggestive of poetry or painting second. And the use of the third person will be the distance between the speakers and the audience.

"I also told you about our daughters and how they are the heart of our hearts, the center of our world, and during our time in the white house we have had the joy of watching them grow from bubbly little girls into about young women."

"I share with you the story of our daughter. We are the couple's daughter is a pearl in the palm heart. In the time of life in the White House and rejoice that we witnessed the daughter from the innocent and lively little girl transformation is a graceful girl. This memory is precious."


The wording of lexical selection can avoid cumbersome, concise and comprehensive tunnel the core idea of the words you. Some of Obama Michel's comments come to a certain extent, contrary to the anti Utopian idea of Trump Donald. When trump said bat stuck in the cave hesitated not wings, Michelle said is bird in her shoulder Twitter as fit as a fiddle. Every word Michelle revealed positive energy: daughter, sweetheart, center of the world, the joy, the transformation, innocent and lively little girl wave and graceful girl.

"" will never I forget that winter morning as I watched our girls just 7 and 10 old years pile into those black SUVs with all those men with guns. "

"I will never forget that cold winter morning, I watched I was seven years old and 10-year-old daughter climbed into the black off-road vehicles, accompany their full gun toting strongman"


The use of vivid pictures to finish your story. The combination of effective visual aids and your anecdotes will leave a mark on the memory of your audience. The little girl's nose against the window, the grim caravan filled with armed men - parallel elements using the audience as if exposure to the scene at the time, in the manufacture of the tense atmosphere played a role in the resonant.

"How we urged them to ignore those who question their father 's citizenship or faith. How we decided that the change language they hear from public figures on TV does not represent the true spirit of this country. How we explain that when someone is cruel or acts like a bully, you don' t stoop to their level."

"We urge our children not to care for those who question the rights and beliefs of their fathers. We teach our children to believe that the full expression of hatred on television is not the true spirit of the country. We never mean to discipline children and violent people extremely cruel and merciless."


Release "three" of the energy. Please note that the speaker is how to use "three" examples to support her. Three examples are cited to explain view is one of the most ancient speech code. And in literature, the number "three" is just the right amount. "Of the people, by the people, for the people." Four or 40 examples will appear the number of excess superfluous. "Three" covers the world, appropriately complemented the knowledge we need to explain.

"Motto is when, they go low we, go high. Our"

"Our motto is that we must continue to move forward when others are at a moral point."


The clever use of short sentences to express idea. The phrase is called the essence of a speech. Because the phrase composed of seven words. Each word is a single syllable. In the "others to moral" and "we continue to upwards walk" these two words there is a parallel relationship, also emphasizes the key word of "walk". This sentence may seem simple, but in reality there are. Began in a clause "when they go to the moral is located in travel time", this sentence describes the opponent's dilemma, this sentence followed by a main clause, clause skillfully will focus shifted to the speakers, in contrast, highlighting the aura of the speaker.

"" like the little black boy who looked up at my husband his eyes wide with hope and wondered he Is my hair like yours Kids "

"The little black boy looked up at my husband, his eyes full of hope. Then asked my husband in doubt, my hair is the same as yours?"


Look for the focus, layers of depth. When Shirley Jackson wrote the story "the lottery", urban annual lottery winners are living stone. Although the outcome of the accident, but the original has been used repeatedly "stone (stone)" to pave the way, never use "rock (stone near synonyms, same translated into stone)".

If you have to choose a word to sum up the whole speech, I think it should be a child". The word is repeated over and over again for 5 times. She also used the other children and Related words, such as sons and daughters is precisely the child related topics such as attract your attention, let you want to further understand the children are doing. In black culture, hair quality is an important factor to determine a person's honor. Therefore, the hair has a "good" and "bad" points. Obama Michel was able to turn the taboo topic into a metaphor and a blessing.

"Somebody who knows this job and takes it seriously. Somebody who understands that the issues of our nation are not black or white. It cannot be boiled down to 140 characters. Because when you have the nuclear codes at your will and the military in your command, you can 't make snap decisions."

"A to the importance of understanding work conscientiously, one can understand the fundamental contradiction is not only non black and white people. The crux of these problems can not be explained with 140 characters. Because when you have a confidential vein, you must not be hasty decision."


Let the sharks lurking near the surface of the water. Remember the movie jaws? Remember how long it took you to wait to see the shark jump out of the water? Before you see a shark, you can only hear the creepy music and see the sights of a tourist being attacked by a shark.

In the Potter Harry series, we often don't see the front of Voldemort. The wizards can't even say his name. Although wore a head strange hair trump look to reptiles of Voldemort, but both of them have subtle common at the mention of his name will shudder, seemed to mention the trump name will defile the speech meaning.

"This is the story of this country. The story that has brought me to the stage. The story of generations of people who felt the lash of bondage, the shame of servitude, the sting of segregation, who kept on striving, and hoping, and doing what needed to be done. So that today, I wake up every morning in a house that was built by slaves. and the the I watch my daughters, two beautiful intelligent black young women - play with the dog on the White House."

"This is the story of our country, it is because of this story that I have the honor to stand here tonight. This story is about the life of several generations of people living in bondage under the whip, the shame of slavery, the sting of isolation. But these people are still surviving day and night, praying that the next generation of leaders will lead them to change the status quo. Now that I am able to every morning in slaves built the White House opened his eyes, looked at my daughters - two wise and beautiful girl in the lawn of the White House and dog frolic play. "


With the most important words to do the end. For me, such words are the atmosphere of the speech into the climax, the moment of extreme vent. Such words could again let me tears, even see it again in second days, will still be shocked.

I can even feel the magic of this passage. Rhyme. Three three examples of heavy use: Story 1, Story 2, Story 3, whip, shame, sting, struggle, hope, change. Followed by two powerful sentence. A passive structure ends "house slaves built"; another is in daily life (girl with dog frolic and touch and symbol (the White House) in stark contrast.